An Unusual Detective: A Review

Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time Book CoverLooking at the world through another’s eyes can be enchanting, funny, disturbing or profound.

Christopher Boone’s avid attention to detail in this first-person canine murder mystery makes this story both funny and heartwarming.

A dog is discovered brutally skewered with a garden rake in the yard of Christopher’s next door neighbor.  His investigations follow the logic of Christopher’s revered Sherlock Holmes and continue dig up more trouble than answers, but he does not lose heart.

In between inquiries, Christopher explains what it is like to live in his autistic world by sharing his interests, dislikes and rational conclusions about events and subjects that he is told are irrational.   Nevertheless, he shows a very convincing argument for why yellow and brown are bad colors.   

For Christopher, logic can be used as a sedatives.  In stressful situations such as a crowded subway station, a complicated math problem that takes several minutes to solve is self-administered so that the body may relax while the brain is otherwise occupied.

As much a character study as a mystery tale, The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time by Mark Haddon is an intelligent and honest account of a young man perceiving the world with its hurts and challenges and bravely venturing forward to find his own place in it.

Concrete vs. Conceptual

All right everyone, put on your thinking caps.   I’m considering the ways we prefer to be inspired.

At a WOTS steering committee meeting last night we were debating the theme for our next year’s writing contest.  Entrants are given a word or phrase which they must use to form their work of fiction, poetry or non-fiction.

Last night we narrowed our choices down to two words, which for now shall be locked away in my secret vault. 

There was quite a distinction between the final choices.  One was a concrete word (think memory, door, flight) the other was a concept (think beauty, perseverance, beyond). 

We realized, after a surprising amount of time spent debating, that a concrete word gave the writer something tangible to start working with, while the concept provided a broader range of possibilities. 

I knew without asking myself that I’d rather have a concrete detail around which to wrap my story.  Another committee member said that the conceptual word was more flexible and inspiring and gave him more to work with.

For the sake of the exercise, if I said you could write about Endure or Rain what would you choose?  What are details that most inspire you?  Is the past or a the future more magnetic to your pen?

Unhappily Ever After

I’m rooting for the hero. I’m hoping to learn some deep truth, even at the cost of emotional pain for the hero and also for myself, because I tend to read with empathy. 

I reach the final page and I realize the story has ended without any resolution of the sorrow.  The ending has no consolation to offer me. 

I’ve just finished reading The Ballad of the Sad Cafe, a piece of short fiction by Carson McCullers.

This story deals carefully with the human condition and its propensity to love, and to love dangerously.

A divorced woman who loves a broken hunchback, a criminal who loves this woman, and the hunchback who loves this criminal intermesh into a love triangle.

The protagonist, Miss Amelia, receives love that is not earned, merited, or wanted and also experiences her own outpouring of unconditional, irrevocable and unrequited love for someone who does not return it in kind. 

A deep message arises: love needn’t have a logical motive, reason or cause.  A lover loves because that is what a lover does, regardless of the acceptance, suitability, or inclination of the beloved.  McCullers writes: “The value and quality of any love is determined solely by the lover” and later: “The lover craves any possible relation with the beloved, even if this experience can cause him only pain.”

This brings to mind Ariadne’s love for Theseus, which is fueled by her own bright, unclouded heart and his desperate need for help.  We know little of their love, since it was so short-lived, but it is safe to say that Ariadne gave her love without mutual return.  

The Ballad of the Sad Cafe draws to its close with a feeling of stranded and abandoned emptiness, similar to Ariadne’s plight when she wakes alone on an island while the man she loves sails away.

What is your reaction to a story that ends sadly?  Does you want to immediately throw it aside? Do you pause to contemplate that the lesson may be a tragic one?

Do you write only sad stories?  Only happy ones?

The Golden Theme

It’s more than just an creating entertaining story, it’s building a story that resonates.  If this new book by Brian McDonald is anything like his Invisible Ink, you will blown away by the structure he reveals for how to write a story with maximum impact.

The best stories are not those that simply dazzle us with a car chase or wow us with clever dialog.  There is nothing wrong with either of these elements, but they shouldn’t be the main selling point of the story.

According to Invisible Ink, the story should follow a seven-step process and be supported by its key message or armature.

There is something to be said about striving towards a story with nothing extraneous to its message.

I am expecting great things from Brian McDonald’s new book.  You can pre-order The Golden Theme on now.  The image is not yet displayed on the page, but I’ve included it in this post.

To get a sense for Brian McDonald’s perspective on writing, visit his blog here.

I also highly encourage everyone to check out Invisible Ink.

The Humble Improve

sunsetA fellow literary mind approaches with the frank question–how much experience do you have in your field? 

“Oh well, I’ve been writing since I was ten.”

Which means, “I definitely know what I’m doing.” 

Any past success, whether it’s a published story of mine, or encouraging feedback from a reader, easily lures me into the trap of thinking that I’ve “arrived” and finally know exactly what I’m doing.

In an excellent post by Brian McDonald (author of the writing handbook Invisible Ink), he talks about meeting experts who keep open hearts, minds, eyes and ears for learning.  Even though these masters are considered leading thinkers and creators in their fields, they exemplify a readiness to be taught and receive correction.

Brian McDonald uses writers at Pixar as an example.  Pixar invited Brian to tell them what he knows about creating story structure.  Although they are considered top writers for what they do, they were kind and receptive to the new information presented.  (Nobody said “I’ve been doing this for a long time, I know what I’m doing”).

I hope as I continue to gain knowledge and increase the breadth of my work, I remember to welcome every learning opportunity with the same enthusiasm and attention that I had when I first began my journey.

It’s a little scary to not lean on past successes as a comforting crutch.  The result is that you are once again a beginner. 

What is the scariest part for you about keeping a “beginner’s mind”?

Make Positive Effort for the Good

Writing and life are inseparable.  I think this is why Natalie Goldberg applied the Zen lessons she learned to the practice of life, art, and writing. 

This morsel of wisdom, the third and final in the list she shared at WOTS, reminds her audience to “make positive effort for the good.” I almost seems too simple, too transparent. 

Practically speaking,  Natalie used the example of forcing herself to brush her teeth when she didn’t feel like doing anything.  A recent divorce served as the prime reason for her listlessness.

Perhaps it begins with brushing my teeth and evolves into buying a bundle of pens that I prefer to write with or having healthy, yummy snacks in the place where I work. 

Some days, it means writing one page of nonsense, just to make sure I’ve written something.

The little bits of determination add up to a large swath of gumption.  I wish you the very best of luck. 🙂

Don’t Be Tossed Away

rejection“We’re sorry to inform you that your submission was not a good fit for our magazine.  Best of luck finding a place for it elsewhere.” 

Haven’t we all been there?  There’s no way I can avoid being refused or ignored when I take my art and show it to the masses.  Rejection is a fact of the writing life.  How in the world do I find ways to keep my chin up?

Natalie Goldberg, author of Writing Down the Bones, had some great things to say on this topic. 

Isolation is the best locale to for high impact discouragement.   I read harsh criticism, I suffer an attack of jealousy for another writer’s success, or I’m wrestling in front of my computer with writer’s block and if I’m I’m alone, it gets bad.

Natalie shared her technique of writing with others, including finding restaurants that never have all their tables full and writing in them for hours at a time, all the while keeping herself in the presence of people. 

She’d call a friend and leave a message asking her to meet at a particular time, but not to call back as to whether she could make it.  This made Natalie show up for the work regardless of whether her friend would be there.

She’d leave chocolate chip cookies in her studio to bribe herself  to work there.

The most important thing is to not be cast away by discouragement, laziness, or anything else that tends to block my path.  Surrounding myself with people and techniques to motivate  me is a good line of defense.

I’ve used chocolate MANY times.

What “safety line” do you use to keep yourself from being tossed away?

Writing Down the Goldberg

I was entranced by the candid, encouraging and graceful presence of Natalie Goldberg earlier this month.  She spoke as the keynote at the Write on the Sound Writers’ Conference in Edmonds, WA the first weekend of this month and the theater was packed. 

Natalie is very famous for her book Writing Down the Bones.  She began her talking by jumping right into her process of discovering herself and becoming a writer. 

Her first plan of action was to think of the thing that had brought her the most pleasure in the world.  This turned out to be selling raffle tickets for a goldfish when she was a small child. 

This fun entrepreneurial spirit morphed into her banding together with like-minded individuals and beginning a natural foods restaurant.  This, combined with a poetry book filled with lines about food inspired her to write about the foods that she she lived and breathed in the restaurant.

Natalie went on to study many things, including Zen, and after years of practice, she decided she had learned three extremely important things from it.  She shared these with us.

1. Continue Under All Circumstances

2. Don’t Be Tossed Away

3. Make Positive Effort for the Good.

I would like to explore these three lessons and what a writer can draw from them.  First, Continue Under All Circumstances:

This lesson has to speak to the times when I don’t want to continue, otherwise, why would I need the reminder?

If I am sick, I or have a big event that may impact my writing schedule, or if I’ve suffered a huge loss, none of these are reasons to retire my pen. 

To be honest, some of my best work has occurred when I was unhappy.  I’ve had a lot of great work when I am happy, too.   If I only write when I am happy, and I missing out on everything good I might have also written when I was sad/busy/tired?

How do we find it within ourselves to continue when laziness, exhaustion or even deep grief seems to build a wall in front of us? 

I pray.  That should always be the first thing that I do, but sometimes my “continuing under all” looks more like me barking at myself in a drill sergeant voice.  Trust me, it’s not nearly as comforting.

After praying, it helps to remind myself that writing is so much more than creating for others–it’s the way I have found to most closely express myself.  Writing is therapy, food, play, work, art, sorrow, rage, determination, trust, and of course many other things to me.

I believe we must continue in all circumstances with our writing even when we do not know what the writing will do for us.  Trust that no word is ever wasted, and allow yourself a dedication without 100% comprehension.

I read in the Artist’s Way that when it comes to our art, we just take care of the quantity and let God take care of the quality.   

Our responsibility is to continue under all circumstance.

Next time, thoughts on Don’t Be Tossed Away.


DessertsSome good friends of mine are an American and Canadian who got married and live nearby with their kids.  They invited me this last weekend to celebrate Canadian Thanksgiving with them. 

A new feast day!  How awesome is that?

How many traditional feasts do we get to celebrate in America culture?  Christmas, Easter, Thanksgiving, Independence Day, weddings for friends…Any other big feasts?  I would argue that feasts are needed more than every few months.  I would also argue, that sometimes those traditional feast days become more stress or rush than a leisurely feast.

Don’t get me wrong.  I love feasts!  Making food and gathering for the purpose of hanging out for hours, eating homemade meals and just relaxing in each other’s company is something that I think we do too little–my heart chimes in “yes” to this thought.

Some nights, I’d rather pop a DVD in the player and bake a frozen pizza.  It’s easier, it’s less intimidating, but it’s not a feast day.  Canadian Thanksgiving woke up a little part of me that wants to feast more frequently and more joyously.

That reminds me of a favorite painting.  Festivals, inspired by such works of art as Lawrence Alma-Tadema’s Spring, shouldn’t be lost.  We should dance in the streets, wave flowers, sing songs and roast pigs with our friends and neighbors. 

If someone invited you to dance with them in the street, would you do it?

Family and All

I love my family.  I was home schooled up through most of high school and I learned a lot about getting along with people and loving someone despite all of their flaws before I had dated anyone.  I practiced a lot on my family.  Family, when it’s strong, sticks with you through thick and thin and is a place of support

Characters, unless they are loners and I don’t tend to write about these much, should have some sort of family.  They needn’t be blood-related, but they should be kindred.  A place where the protagonist feels at home, a safe place to state his thoughts without worrying whether they are politically correct.  Keep this in mind when you put your protagonist through the ordeals she will face.

As a side note, families that are blood related have an easy time harmonizing because their vocal chords are similarly constructed. This is my family: my mom, my brother, my sister and I singing at a benefit concert, We Are Priceless, to raise awareness about human trafficking that is happening right here in Washington.